Dare To Whisper To The Warrior

OH MY GOODNESS!!! I'M JUST SO PROUD OF THAT PIECE!!
II TOOK ME AGES BUT IT WAS TOTALLY WORTH IT!

I saw the Warrior Mane 6. I LUFFED it! So I HAD to do Cloudie in a Warrior cosplay.
Oh my~! Long time no draw on paper! Thank goodness I still know how to draw traditionally!
The battery of my tablet pen was dead but I was too lazy to change it... I had a sheet of paper under my elbow...
And THIS! Suddenly appeared! (After 4+ Hours of work...)
I first wanted to color it with pencils but I think it will stay like this because I don't want to ruin it. I will make a vector out of it I think... If I do, I'll probably correct some anatomy mistakes I made!
The original sketch was horrible, very rough and quickly done, the second was still rough but looked good, problem was that the body was a bit too long, and then, the third sketch, cleaned up, was Amazing! So, here we are with the story of this drawing. Thanks for wasting your time reading this.

So, have a little angry Cloudie!
No reference taken. I did this from scratch!
Oh! and you'll probably notice (if you already know my charrie of course) that I changed her hairstyle a bit on this one. I just wanted to try something. I hope you like. Stay "tuned" for the colored version coming soon!

What I like on this :
-The head
-The expression
-The axe
-The mane/Tail style
-The cape
-The ear

What I dislike on this :
-The body shape
-The CM
-The hindleg(s)
-The straight wings (WHY?!?)

Hehe~!
Cloudie (Cloud Whisperer) © ~Arceus55
Art © ~Arceus55
MLP : FiM © Am I really suppose to write it? It's not serious?